The Intensity of Inner One
Close your eyes and hold breath
Count to ten and leave in air,
I think you can feel rest on tenth
Indeed,it's how you feel layer.
The inner layer of own mind,
In the deep ocean,you suppose
If you dive,you can see many kind
Of fishs and flora,and rise with close nose.
And again dive in it to see,
But I think you feel still
With this imagination ,now flee
Like a bird and tension kill.
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