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The Instigator

I woke up feeling great today,
alive with joy and energy
Then at the park, to my dismay,
an old She-Devil I did see!

She’s back in town. I’ve got the blues!
Again, I’ll see her smarmy smile.
“It’s great to see you, Hon!” she’ll ooze.
Behind her grin lurk gall and guile.

My friends and I must watch our backs,
where daggers she once plunged in deep.
It’s difficult to foil attacks
by evil. Does it ever sleep?

At sabotage, she’s skilled and slick.
No reputation’s safe with her.
This woman’s warped; she really sick.
If you should meet her, you’d concur!


 
entered in John Hamilton's NA Re-run Contest June 22, 2019

revised for Tania Kitchin's contest It Was a Good Morning Until--
February 11, 2021

March 23, 2021
entered in the It Only Seems That Way contest     placed 7th of 10
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

December 18, 2021
entered in the King-Size Bull Crap Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
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Alex Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Great narration. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 3:51 PM
This is awesome, Janice. Many can relate to...Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
Wiggett Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Oh, this is awesome! I had to smile :) I think we've all met her:) such a wonderful description. Congratulations:)
Calasibetta Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Janice, this is great! So much truth: a sweet greeting, feigned for nefarious intentions.....many of us have experienced. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Paulette
Calasibetta Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Janice, this is great! So much truth: a sweet greeting, feigned for nefarious intentions.....many of us have experienced. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Paulette
Canerdy Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Thank you so much, Paulette! Janice
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 2:59 AM
oh you've met her too lol, great one Janice, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Neumann Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 5:26 AM
Distance can be very sweet ...
Canerdy Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 8:47 AM
YES! Thanks, Kai. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 6:00 PM
oh way to do the contest theme. REally good work!
Canerdy Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Life does encounter such personality ..as you so aptly describe..well written, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Kinch  Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 6:37 AM
Great poem, she sure sounds someone to avoid.
Canerdy Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Thanks so much, Elizabeth. Actually, I don't know anyone this BAD. Janice
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