The Inner Core

Be it human, be it more,
The most complex substance is the ore of inner core.
It’s vital for a stronger base and the line of arc,
It’s vital for the making of nature and emotional mark.

Most of the time we are searching only on the upper thrust,
Without even lowering our searches down the crust.
We see only the heat, roughness, dryness…
But no, eye on how melted the inner ground is.

There comes complications, as so many thing toughly packed there,
Hidden aspirations, sorrow, guilt, fear, loneliness are just the mere.
But, who dips down there, with patience of being a with care,
With time to just sit and hear 
And dig out reasons and tear…
   the unwanted spread all over..
   and misery creeping for a makeover.

If we care for some, we have to be alert
Be it nature or nature’s birth..
    let not go anyone to dearth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 13, 2011 at 11:41 AM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Abhiruchi. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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April 13, 2011 at 3:02 AM
Excellent write, a book has more to offer than the cover. Enjoyed this well written read.
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