The Inner Appearance

You have seen me through the category
  of non existence
  yet in me you found a gold mine
you took the sky achievement medal
to entertain yourself, your few specials
    and your many many enslaved assistants.

I hate to look this lost,
this ashamed, this fresh, this pure
I want to be seen as I-in my worst income 
                       and in my best outcome
I blame no man, not even a white man
   Never on my mother
I blame no one except myself


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Written between 2006 
Just the young thoughts of the young mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Donnay Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Awesome possum njeri, thank you for writing and sharing this poem.. Can I apply it to myself too?
Hunjeri Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 2:54 AM
Thank u Jennifer. Yes u can apply it to yourself too if u want too. Have a good one.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 7:37 AM
The age of understanding unfolds towards destiny. I enjoyed your introspective piece. Our world is filled with people who spend energy blaming others that could be concentrated on changing their circumstances. All achievement grows out of adversity, if it is harnessed there is no telling how far it will propell us.
Hunjeri Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 8:45 PM
Wow. Those are words to keep. Thank you Richard for your wise words.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 1:30 AM
Soul searching at an early age is a sign of knowledge of the self to come! Very well done dear Njeri!
Hunjeri Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:22 AM
Thank you for the wise words Demetrios. I really appreciate them
Vaso Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Nice! especially if you dont blame me!!!! :)
Hunjeri Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:21 AM
Lol! That was 2006. You never know Arthur, this girl may start blaming... Anyway thank you so much for visiting my poem
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