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The Inner Appearance

You have seen me through the category of non existence yet in me you found a gold mine you took the sky achievement medal to entertain yourself, your few specials and your many many enslaved assistants. I hate to look this lost, this ashamed, this fresh, this pure I want to be seen as I-in my worst income and in my best outcome I blame no man, not even a white man Never on my mother I blame no one except myself this poem is also on the archives of poetry.com Written between 2006 Just the young thoughts of the young mind

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Date: 3/8/2015 10:24:00 AM
Awesome possum njeri, thank you for writing and sharing this poem.. Can I apply it to myself too?
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/5/2015 2:54:00 AM
Thank u Jennifer. Yes u can apply it to yourself too if u want too. Have a good one.
Date: 2/28/2015 7:37:00 AM
The age of understanding unfolds towards destiny. I enjoyed your introspective piece. Our world is filled with people who spend energy blaming others that could be concentrated on changing their circumstances. All achievement grows out of adversity, if it is harnessed there is no telling how far it will propell us.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/1/2015 8:45:00 PM
Wow. Those are words to keep. Thank you Richard for your wise words.
Date: 2/28/2015 1:30:00 AM
Soul searching at an early age is a sign of knowledge of the self to come! Very well done dear Njeri!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/28/2015 6:22:00 AM
Thank you for the wise words Demetrios. I really appreciate them
Date: 2/27/2015 10:21:00 PM
Nice! especially if you dont blame me!!!! :)
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/28/2015 6:21:00 AM
Lol! That was 2006. You never know Arthur, this girl may start blaming... Anyway thank you so much for visiting my poem

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