The Infinite Sky - El

The blue, far flung canopy
Laced with specks of galaxy
White fluffy hovering clouds
touching pinnacles in crowds
Amazing myths and stories
Of mystic cosmic bodies
The blue, far flung canopy


Elemental Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina 
Date: 10-07-2021.

Placed: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Messina Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Very nice, Patri. Great imagery here. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
Venkata Ramana Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 4:43 AM
This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
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