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The Inexorable Snake

The snake slithers on An old bird sees and shivers Another door shuts Another candle A chin held in empty palm Gloom on floating bloom The butterfly flies From the tightly held old chest For another rose For sure none can know The black emptiness before As well as after In between this pearl Maroon dunes in the blue curl Pink thrill you unfurl In his hall no dance The snake has devoured the toad Generates deep dance _________________________________ 16 March 2017

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Date: 3/19/2017 10:32:00 AM
Very nice set of haiku... one rose after another...
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Date: 3/18/2017 10:21:00 PM
In the midst of fear there is always a bright positive - Ah! if we only could understand that fear and blackness are but an invisible threshold Once crossed are conquered forever - Thanks for your insight -
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/19/2017 5:38:00 AM
You have very rightly and nicely noted the core, if not the fulcrum ... Thank you so much for the welcome appreciation ...
Date: 3/17/2017 5:16:00 AM
- An impressive set of haikus poems, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/18/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ...
Date: 3/16/2017 6:52:00 AM
...a very long snake but an impressive one dear, Probir! Beautiful my friend, a 7 for each!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/16/2017 7:25:00 AM
Yes, The snakes are terribly long when they strike ... Thank you ...

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