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The Inevitable

The load of the day he bears on his back On the brink of insanity just ready to crack Yet the load is lifted and carried away But only to be regained by the next coming day A lonely soul with no one to care With out a heart or a love to share He thinks it is best To put a bullet into his chest Maybe some poison or a great height Any way possible he wants it done tonight People reach out as the moment draws nigh The inevitable happens and the young man dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/23/2011 1:48:00 PM
sorry it says that my soup mail is empty @lexi
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Date: 5/16/2009 7:31:00 PM
Hey...Idk if u got me soup mail back but this is an AMAZING poem...I absolutely am amazed at your awesome poem writing... :) Lexi!! XOXOXOXO
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:08:00 PM
Wow what a great flowing poem although its sad its wonderfully written ! Laura :)
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Date: 5/15/2009 4:19:00 PM
let me be the first to say this is briliant. i love it. very personal and very poingiant. John Henry Loving III
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