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The Indivisible

There is one God
We have divided up 
The Indivisible
One family 
Of brothers and sisters
We have divided up 
The Indivisible
One world
We have divided up
The Indivisible
One heart 
One soul
One spirit
We have divided up
The Indivisible
And we can't put 
Him back together again

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/30/2011 1:35:00 AM

Well crafted and realised... your repetition of 'indivisible' is most effective, and the line spacing is powerful and provocative. Well done! Best wishes, Keith

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2011 6:56:00 AM

Creative and interesting verses on indivisible, Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2011 5:22:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Brian. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol