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The Indivisible

There is one God We have divided up The Indivisible One family Of brothers and sisters We have divided up The Indivisible One world We have divided up The Indivisible One heart One soul One spirit We have divided up The Indivisible And we can't put Him back together again

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/30/2011 1:35:00 AM

Well crafted and realised... your repetition of 'indivisible' is most effective, and the line spacing is powerful and provocative. Well done! Best wishes, Keith

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2011 6:56:00 AM

Creative and interesting verses on indivisible, Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2011 5:22:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Brian. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol