The Incredible Ruck

His eyes get bloodshot!
Fight engorges his body!
He roars and defends!

Enter his red zone
To hurt or help... be dismayed!
His attack strengthens!

He pays back double!
He avenges his soul's sake!
He cools down in days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 10, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Interesting and vivid haiku series. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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January 7, 2009 at 7:14 PM
I love your clever set of Haiku's. Laura
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January 7, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Nice haiku's I love writing them too. DN
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