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"The Immensities" I shut out the world and inside me the deep azurine blue jumbled pieces of unread hues between the boundaries of the lost world within me and you becomes Blue Sky Sky Blue and further inwards through deeper true galaxies in my mind open revealing mysteries unopened at the bottom of a lake where there lies She the Lady in a shattered cornucopia her body tattooed in unread stories their curlicues shining like rare jewels waiting to be touched face turned up looking through a reflection rippling the haunting Just above the surface the inner reaches in to touch the outer I shut out the world and inside me the deep azurine blue glistens with jumbled pieces of unread hues that extinguish the jagged like dissolving cut glass melting their confused boundaries inside their overflowing war torn cries and their stormy unsorry torrential blues a new world inside opening illusions true The Immensities (LadyLabyrinth / 2023) " O, wake once more! how rude soe'er the hand That ventures o'er thy magic maze to stray; O, wake once more! though scarce my skill command Some feeble echoing of thine earlier lay: Though harsh and faint, and soon to die away, And all unworthy of thy nobler strain, Yet if one heart throb higher at its sway, The wizard note has not been touched in vain. Then silent be no more! Enchantress, wake again!"

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Date: 12/7/2023 4:16:00 PM
In the depths of the lake, breath wouldn't be needed to take...https://genius.com/Martin-garrix-drown-lyrics
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Date: 12/18/2023 4:55:00 AM
“There is no Space or Time, only Intensity; tame things have no immensity.”
Date: 12/7/2023 1:45:00 PM
"Forever Hold My Breath"/Harold Budd & Clive Wright; Ratnasambhava Buddha
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:46:00 PM
https://youtu.be/rETVpAqIshQ?si=QUyNg4GuTBbKuYR0
Date: 12/7/2023 1:27:00 PM
"In the Arthurian legends, the Lady of the Lake symbolizes duality, the divine right to rule, and redemption. The first is implied when the Lady's being was divided by the magician Merlin, forming two parts. The second is demonstrated by how she possesses the sword."
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:22:00 PM
https://www.gutenberg.org/files/3011/3011-h/3011-h.htm
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:23:00 PM
excerpt, Sir Walter Scott.
Date: 12/7/2023 12:37:00 PM
"View From The Roof"/Robert Carty/Ratnasambhava Buddha; album: Himalayan Dreams http://www.deepskymusic.net/
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Date: 12/7/2023 12:37:00 PM
https://youtu.be/9AFN6X2OWJM?si=CXqztTDOSaGsQM1P

Book: Shattered Sighs