The Immensities



"The Immensities"

I shut out the world 
and inside me the 
deep azurine blue 
jumbled pieces 
of unread hues 
between the 
boundaries 
of the lost world
within me and you 
becomes Blue Sky
Sky Blue

and further inwards
through deeper true
galaxies in my mind open 
revealing mysteries
unopened at the bottom 
of a lake where there lies She 
the Lady in a shattered cornucopia
her body tattooed 
in unread stories their curlicues
shining like rare jewels
waiting to be touched
face turned up 
looking through
a reflection rippling 
the haunting 
Just 

above the surface
the inner reaches in 
to touch the outer 

I shut out the world
and inside me the
deep azurine blue
glistens with 
jumbled pieces 
of unread hues 
that extinguish the jagged 
like dissolving cut glass
melting their confused boundaries
inside their overflowing
war torn cries and 
their stormy unsorry
torrential blues

a new world
inside 
opening illusions true

The Immensities

(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)





" O, wake once more! how rude soe'er the hand
        That ventures o'er thy magic maze to stray;
     O, wake once more! though scarce my skill command
        Some feeble echoing of thine earlier lay:
     Though harsh and faint, and soon to die away,
        And all unworthy of thy nobler strain,
     Yet if one heart throb higher at its sway,
        The wizard note has not been touched in vain.
     Then silent be no more! Enchantress, wake again!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/7/2023 4:16:00 PM
In the depths of the lake, breath wouldn't be needed to take...https://genius.com/Martin-garrix-drown-lyrics
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/18/2023 4:55:00 AM
“There is no Space or Time, only Intensity; tame things have no immensity.”
Date: 12/7/2023 1:45:00 PM
"Forever Hold My Breath"/Harold Budd & Clive Wright; Ratnasambhava Buddha
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:46:00 PM
https://youtu.be/rETVpAqIshQ?si=QUyNg4GuTBbKuYR0
Date: 12/7/2023 1:27:00 PM
"In the Arthurian legends, the Lady of the Lake symbolizes duality, the divine right to rule, and redemption. The first is implied when the Lady's being was divided by the magician Merlin, forming two parts. The second is demonstrated by how she possesses the sword."
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:22:00 PM
https://www.gutenberg.org/files/3011/3011-h/3011-h.htm
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:23:00 PM
excerpt, Sir Walter Scott.
Date: 12/7/2023 12:37:00 PM
"View From The Roof"/Robert Carty/Ratnasambhava Buddha; album: Himalayan Dreams http://www.deepskymusic.net/
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Date: 12/7/2023 12:37:00 PM
https://youtu.be/9AFN6X2OWJM?si=CXqztTDOSaGsQM1P
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