The Imitators

red plumes, sunset blooms
since denim sky blues faded
lookalikes, sweet fumes

ever moving wind
fragrant and changing like sky
cedes to misty trend

reds, pinks, plums and golds
the world I knew went away
mimics unpatrolled

scarlet summer sass
red cardinal sings sultry
diamonds in green grass

appreciationbeautycolorflowernaturehaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

February 27, 2024 at 2:52 PM

Hello Evelyn, YOu have painted a beautiful picture with your words. This poem will be my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 27, 2024 at 4:25 PM

Hello Darlene, I am so happy to know that. Thank you for your kind words and for the fave. Hugs. :)

Paula Goldsmith

February 17, 2024 at 11:45 AM

"The Imitators" is a lovely/colorful Haiku write with pretty picture. Have a blessed day writing away............

Hilda Greenhough

February 15, 2024 at 12:19 PM

This beautiful grouping of haikus freshens my imagination with color and seasons.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 15, 2024 at 7:24 PM

I am so glad to hear that, Hilda. Thank you very much. :)

Christina Bowring

February 14, 2024 at 8:01 AM

This is so gorgeous dear Evelyn. So descriptive and wonderful imagery in all the haiku’s. Love the artistic use of colour. The last stanza, in particular, is divine.’ Diamonds in green grass’. All your beautiful poems are such a joy to read and this one is no exception. Thank you for sharing your gift. Hugs and blessings to you dear friend xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 14, 2024 at 12:19 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind words, my friend. Reading your beautiful comment has been a great pleasure. Have a lovely day. :)