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The illusion of timeless silence

The ILLUSION of a TIMELESS SILENCE
Drenched the RUSTIC creaking barn
Its tortured wind scarred face
Snarling at the SWIRLING winds

A lonely BLOSSOM sprouts atop a fencepost
Mice scurry about an empty silo
A naked scarecrow dances in a barren field
Dreams carried away on the dust

They had returned, the children’s children
To piece together a family history
To sit and weep while viewing pictures
Of weathered, beaten faces

Twisted, tarnished features
Unable to EMANATE a SYNTHETIC hope
Causing a sadness to consume
The ILLUSION of a TIMELESS SILENCE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/27/2024 11:09:00 AM
Wow! Love this especially the second verse and cool imagery. Fave and Congrats, John!
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Date: 7/27/2024 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Painters paint with paint. Writers paint with words....  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
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Date: 7/27/2024 8:24:00 AM
Oh! reading your words were like looking at a beautiful painting. Rich writing. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/27/2024 5:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
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Date: 7/22/2024 10:54:00 PM
This is a voyage to a frozen past seen through photographs and memories. It's a beautiful description of a person's journey to discover family.
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Date: 7/21/2024 11:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work here many blessings
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Date: 7/21/2024 10:29:00 AM
The title alone is potd worthy. Interesting premise
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