The Idiom of Love

I was drinking wine
I was making minds mine
I was turning keys
I was setting people free
I was being deceived 
By the silent side of me

I was welcomed home
I was gone away
I was free to roam
I was told to stay
I was being confused
By the soul that I had used

I was flying by
I was flying high
I was never questioned why
I was prepared to die
I was beautified
By the ugly side of life

I was crying tears
I was drowning in my fears
I was feeling weak
I was releasing my years
I was afraid to peak
Afraid to get near

I was smart enough to be a step ahead
She did more crying than I did
I was strong enough to be brave
She loved enough to be my slave
I was dumb enough to let her go
She was smart enough to lose hope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 3, 2011 at 4:29 PM
I agree with both the comments. I still say if you love something set it free . Many things in life can hurt and we learn from our mistakes. I like the emotion in this write. God Bless Phyl
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February 28, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Its a pity to let one go when one offers so much love. .its a pity she lost hope. .its a pity she isn't readin this. .hope its fiction. .greatly penned poem with a deep message. .C.C
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February 28, 2011 at 2:10 AM
Hi Ryan, This is very sad and captures the pain of losing someone you love and the realisation of our mistakes. Well done! N :)
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