The Icer

I needed a cake for a birthday;
I stopped at a fancy food store.
With Mothers’ Day coming tomorrow,
I lucked out with choices galore.

My daughter loves everything chocolate
And one seemed to really just pop –
A mousse-filled creation in layers,
But crowned with a satiny top.

When asked if the cake could, with icing,
Be personalized on the spot,
The counterman grinned with excitement;
I gathered he does this a lot.

With beautifully swirled dainty letters,
How deftly he piped every word,
But before he completed his artwork,
A happenstance strangely occurred.

He’d asked not a word ‘bout my daughter
But finished his icing design
With a musical staff and a clef note
When it’s music that makes her life shine.

How’d you know? was the best I could muster.
He just smiled as he tenderly placed
What he’d lovingly done in a cake box;
It’s just perfect, no matter the taste.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 3:58 AM
- Enjoy this happy day ... mom and daughter :) - Lovely written, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 10:21 PM
May I have a slice? Happy birthday:)
Rigoler Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 6:13 PM
I love the way you can change an ordinary life experience into a delightful poem! Sadly chocolate isn't my favorite cake. I'll eat it of course if offered. I prefer carrot or lemon cake, Boston Cream, or coconut. As for my vacuum cleaner, it's a very old clunker, but it works. Thanks for the stop and keep writing your delightful poems. / M
Smith Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Oh just lovely Ilene. A happy birthday to your daughter.
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