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The Icer

I needed a cake for a birthday; I stopped at a fancy food store. With Mothers’ Day coming tomorrow, I lucked out with choices galore. My daughter loves everything chocolate And one seemed to really just pop – A mousse-filled creation in layers, But crowned with a satiny top. When asked if the cake could, with icing, Be personalized on the spot, The counterman grinned with excitement; I gathered he does this a lot. With beautifully swirled dainty letters, How deftly he piped every word, But before he completed his artwork, A happenstance strangely occurred. He’d asked not a word ‘bout my daughter But finished his icing design With a musical staff and a clef note When it’s music that makes her life shine. How’d you know? was the best I could muster. He just smiled as he tenderly placed What he’d lovingly done in a cake box; It’s just perfect, no matter the taste.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/14/2017 3:58:00 AM
- Enjoy this happy day ... mom and daughter :) - Lovely written, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2017 10:21:00 PM
May I have a slice? Happy birthday:)
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Date: 5/13/2017 6:13:00 PM
I love the way you can change an ordinary life experience into a delightful poem! Sadly chocolate isn't my favorite cake. I'll eat it of course if offered. I prefer carrot or lemon cake, Boston Cream, or coconut. As for my vacuum cleaner, it's a very old clunker, but it works. Thanks for the stop and keep writing your delightful poems. / M
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Date: 5/13/2017 5:43:00 PM
Oh just lovely Ilene. A happy birthday to your daughter.
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