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The Hypocondriac

i dont feel well at all today
i think ive got the flu
the sweat is pouring out of me
like ive had a vindaloo
its minus three degrees outside
the frost is on the ground
but i am burning up and now
my head is spinning round
the pins and needles in my arm
are shooting down my side
and now im going dizzy
like im on a fairground ride
a crushing pain is in my chest
my breathings getting slack
i cant beleive i chose today
to have a heart attack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/17/2009 11:25:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Brian. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2009 11:56:00 AM
Sounds like your day just got worse, excellent whimsical poem, loved it. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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