Shadow Hamilton Poet Haiku

The Hush Before Dawn

The hush before dawn
is fraught with poignant silence
as night turns to day


Trinkling sounds flow
through the air as the river
bounces over rocks


Deep silence abounds
and not a murmur to be heard 
stillness shrouding all

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Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2013 at 3:43 PM I like how you inserted the images of stillness into these three stanzas.great title for the whole piece. Shadow Hamilton October 30, 2013 at 6:30 AM Hi Andrea that is what I like about Haiku you can pack so much into so few words ty for reading Shadow x smile hugs

Litan Dey October 29, 2013 at 12:32 PM Many times i see and heard hush before dawn.It's so charm and full of energy.After a long time i feel it again through your pen.loved it dear... Shadow Hamilton October 30, 2013 at 6:31 AM hi Litan and Ty both for reading and kind review Shadow x smile

Richard Lamoureux October 28, 2013 at 7:04 PM I love that feeling just before dawn, you have captured it well Shadow. Shadow Hamilton October 29, 2013 at 5:38 AM hi Richard me too. Glad that you feel I caught it Ty for reading hugs Shadow x smile soup mail

Dr.Ram Mehta October 28, 2013 at 9:24 AM Beautiful time to think and write, Shadow Shadow Hamilton October 29, 2013 at 5:37 AM yes it is Richard something magical about dawn Ty for reading Shadow x smile