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The husband and the wife

Prolific? Teriffic! Call me when the check has come But honey no dime For my rhyme Will arrive Then woman What the heck I'll break your neck And sell the ivory for wine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 10/29/2008 8:13:00 PM
Well that was very interesting Autumn - In the third stanza a sad truth is spoken in many cases - I have learned that violence is never the answer - Except of course in defense - Back when we were addicts my wife and I had one fight that I consider one of my most shameful days - I didn't beat her or nothing don't get me wrong but I did do some things that I shall always regret - Great poem - God Bless
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Date: 10/29/2008 11:48:00 AM
This is funny Autumn. Blessings Michael
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