The Hunt

Our love was reaching at new heights 
but unexpectedly she disappeared; 
leaving my heart solitary. 
I rambled for her with wet eyes.

Melancholy seized my soul.
Thousand times I dried my tongue 
calling her name in the wilderness.
But it turned out to be a waste of time.

Then one night, I saw her in the woods
and a chill ran down my spine;
She was half human and half zombie;
Grabbing an human arm with her teeth.

I knew she would invade the hamlet
as she was not in her own control.
Slyly I took out my  gun
and ceased my beloved wife's heart forever.

Eventually, I understood why she left me;
because she loved me and didn't want to harm me.
I hugged her strongly and sobbed for hours,
"I'm sorry, forgive me."
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Date - 7th November 2016

Contest - The Hunt
Sponsored by: Casarah Nance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Well done Augustus, congratulations...
Black Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Thanks. --- Augustus
Canerdy Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Good job with this imaginative poem, Augustus. Janice
Black Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Thank you. Augustus
Rycroft Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Congrats well-done x
Black Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Thanks.. A.B.
Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 11:50 PM
fantasy-filled story worthy of a win, augustus.. sweet congrats!..huggs
Black Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Thanks you.. A.B
Nance Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 4:56 PM
This was a great take on theme, well done
Black Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Thanks.
Nayak Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:30 AM
wow! excellent write on this theme! true love is gushing out here ....some leave us though very painful for them for our good! Sacrifice! a 7! Unique idea here, i enjoyed it Dear Augustus:)// love, Anu:)
Black Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 6:37 AM
Thanks a lot dear Anu.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:12 PM
wow, that was a good one, Augustus. I am a huge fan of WAlking Dead and this really put me in mind of what those poor people would be feeling to have to kill a loved one. HOpe Casarah likes this one you penned! (I am also hoping she likes MINE)
Black Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Thank you, yes she will also like yours.
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 7:59 AM
- A lively imagination, a great suggestion for this contest Augustus - Good luck ! - hugs // Sun :)
Black Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thanks a lot. Hugs .. A.B
Y. Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Hi Augustus, What a unique on the contest theme. I enjoyed the hunt although it was very sad. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -) Alexis
Black Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much.
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