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The Hunt

a morsel of food
                                                 a mammal scurries to hide
                                                    as hawks soar on high

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Kash Poet

May 12, 2012 at 8:07 PM

Very nice haiku here.So what do you think am I a male or a female?

Terry L. Allen

May 13, 2012 at 4:29 PM

Your picture looked male at least the one I saw but your sensativity is more akin to a female so either you are a ladies female butch or a ladies man with a beautiful soul. I must confess that I couldn't swear which but to me that doesn't matter. If you are my friend that is all that matters. Huggs TLee

Terry O'Leary

April 29, 2012 at 5:12 PM

Nice image... I would also like to try Haiku... but it seems a bit beyond me... mabe later (with a bit of inspiration from yours...) Terry

Terry L. Allen

April 29, 2012 at 8:03 PM

Terry we have several people on the Soup that are next to experts at it. I have been taking lessons from one named Charlie Henderson. They also have classes on Facebook. I warn you once you get started and understand them they are addicting. TLee Thanks for the review.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 15, 2012 at 3:55 PM

Well done Terry, like this one ! - oxox Anne-Lise

Terry L. Allen

April 15, 2012 at 4:08 PM

Just trying to spread my wings with different styles of poetry. This next Haiku that I did Hickery Dickery I did for fun. Thanks for your kind review Anne-lise. Huggs TLee

John Rhinem

April 15, 2012 at 1:02 PM

Smile ˜ So Let It Be As It Must Be For Now ˜ I Just Rejoice In The Beauty Which In Unsearchable Wisdom Has Fashioned It All * 'O, Sooo Much Beauty ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜

Terry L. Allen

April 15, 2012 at 1:12 PM

I'm not sure I understand your review except maybe in the grand scheme of things but thank you for your kindness to review. I am just learning about Haiku and am trying to perfect my use of this form with the help of another member.

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