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The Hummingbirds Thrum

Able to breath, in a moment of serenity, staring into eyes, that hold the beautiful sunlight, booming hearts beat, like the thrum of hummingbirds wings, tracing circles softly on skin, finger tips lightly touching, kissing lips, skin brushing, able to breath, with you by me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/17/2010 7:25:00 AM
a beauty and delight, good one Rain. Never heard someone expressing a love moment embracing a humming bird, love it, truly a gift of art,..p.d.
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Date: 5/14/2010 6:27:00 PM
It's a wonderful write. I enjoyed it
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Date: 5/14/2010 5:16:00 PM
Beautiful clarity. I could almost feel the heat of someone exhaling on my neck. I'm going to read this to my wife. -Josh
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Date: 5/14/2010 3:21:00 PM
Love seems to be foremost in our minds this time of year, Rain. Awesome imagery in this poem describes passion so well! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2010 1:12:00 PM
Wow, what a beautiful piece.. Love Wilma
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Date: 5/14/2010 12:02:00 PM
I guess first love is like breathing for the first time. I like this poem mucho. Love, daver
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