The Hummingbirds Thrum

Able to breath,
in a moment of serenity,
staring into eyes,
that hold the beautiful sunlight,
booming hearts beat,
like the thrum of hummingbirds wings,
tracing circles softly on skin,
finger tips lightly touching,
kissing lips, skin brushing,
able to breath,
with you by me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 17, 2010 at 7:25 AM
a beauty and delight, good one Rain. Never heard someone expressing a love moment embracing a humming bird, love it, truly a gift of art,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 6:27 PM
It's a wonderful write. I enjoyed it
Freeze Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 5:16 PM
Beautiful clarity. I could almost feel the heat of someone exhaling on my neck. I'm going to read this to my wife. -Josh
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 3:21 PM
Love seems to be foremost in our minds this time of year, Rain. Awesome imagery in this poem describes passion so well! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Wow, what a beautiful piece.. Love Wilma
Austin Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 12:02 PM
I guess first love is like breathing for the first time. I like this poem mucho. Love, daver
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