The House

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July 7, 2023

For A Brian Strand Premiere Contest No 1228

A house I built with love and care filled it with dream a thing of great joy for me ==================== but it is empty even now I haven’t made it for me but for twined you &me until time takes us away I wait for you longingly make the house a home filled with joy of heaven | |with togetherness | |we will invent here | |so come as a fairy | |door is wide open ==================== |||||||||| ||||||||||

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2023 11:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/20/2023 10:23:00 PM

Thank you once again, Paula.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2023 5:53:00 AM

- Lovely poem ... creative shape, Subimal - Hope the coffee is ready :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/20/2023 10:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula.