Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Shape

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July 7, 2023

For A Brian Strand Premiere Contest No 1228

The House

A
house
I built with
love and care
filled it with dream
a thing of great joy for me
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but it is empty even now
I haven’t made it for me
but  for twined you &me
until time takes us away
I wait  for you  longingly
make the house a home
filled with joy of heaven 
|       |with togetherness
|       |we will invent here
|       |so come as a fairy
|       |door is wide  open
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Anne-Lise Andresen July 11, 2023 at 11:55 AM - Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs Subimal Sinha-Roy July 20, 2023 at 10:23 PM Thank you once again, Paula.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2023 at 5:53 AM - Lovely poem ... creative shape, Subimal - Hope the coffee is ready :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Subimal Sinha-Roy July 20, 2023 at 10:23 PM Thank you so much, Paula.