The Hour Late

Stepping off the edge
  and into the fog,
  —I cast my fate

As time then dared
  all blinders off,
  —the hour late

(Villanova Pennsylvania: December, 2016)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bateman Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Hello Kurt, A short but very powerful rhyme here. "Fate," as with "Destiny," sometimes requires a leap of faith from all of us. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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December 16, 2016 at 1:47 AM
Very nice, very nice, Sir.
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