The Hottest Sauce In the Universe

The burning
The pain
I will not submit!

It will not stop
It only gets worse
I will not let it take over!

Here I go
Running in circles
I will not lose control!

Ahh
I failed...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nelson Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 8:44 AM
sometimes the simplest poems we write are our best sentimental gems we find one day and laugh with our own selves, I've written poetry like this before and then found it latyer in life shook my head thinking to myself i cant believe i wrote that, this is like poetry soup year book material
Brown Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 9:12 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent writing today Echo. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 2:13 PM
funny, welcome to the hot soup! keep sharing with us!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Wondere what kind of sauce that was? Keep writing. Sara
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