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The Hospital Waiting Room

In the hospital waiting room
you like to be in good time
there you are feel little nervous
up tightness within out of rhyme

No matter serious or minor
your ailment in pain or not
you’re never sure how it’ll go
makes your mind always in doubt

When your time comes to see Dr
always reassuring if he gives a smile
this makes you feel more at ease
since last appointment been a while

Good to get out that surgery door
with absolutely nothing at all wrong
even a prescription is not too bad
as your inner self’s quite strong!

(some thoughts on mine and others experiences at the hospital waiting room!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/9/2016 5:35:00 AM
Experiences of life in pains skilfully collected in a poem... Like it...
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/9/2016 7:14:00 AM
thanks Probir, glad you liked it, have blessed day, Gordon
Date: 6/9/2016 3:29:00 AM
Can relate to this:)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/9/2016 7:14:00 AM
thanks Jo!

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