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The Hopeless Case

A mother left crying alone in her pew Begging the Lord for a miracle new … The only thing he was good at was being bad Bus stations train stations corn maidens in drag He came and he went with the most discordant rhyme His sins left uncounted but marking the time In Akron Ohio his grifting unwrapped Those roads in New Mexico calling him back The lights and the sirens again on their way His thumb in the wind — Saint Jude in dismay (The Breezeway: January, 2024)

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Date: 1/19/2024 2:28:00 PM
Chronic problem. You told it right. Question is, does he take the easy road, or just doesn't he know where the road is?
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 1/20/2024 9:51:00 AM
You get to decide, thanks.
Date: 1/19/2024 1:54:00 PM
No person is totally hopeless. The right event, the right person, the right time, etc. can bring them to their knees. I would say though there is about 1 to 2 percent of the population that are psychopathic personalities, and it is a condition where there is something wrong with their brains. Sad that this happens in life but not all psychopathic persons kill people. Thanks for sharing your work with us. I enjoyed reading it. Mothers hurt when their children go wrong. Sara K
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 1/20/2024 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Sara. Unfortunately a bad seed is often deflowered.

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