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The Hook

beer and Urine smell… I liked what she had to sell landed me in jail

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/4/2011 8:14:00 AM
hmmm, shady dealings!!
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Date: 2/26/2011 2:23:00 PM
hahahah. beautiful structured, robb
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Date: 2/26/2011 2:14:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my haiku. I smiled on reading "The Hook." I have been there many times, but never landed in jail. Guess I was lucky. Looking back I say to myself: "You did what"
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