The Hook

beer and Urine smell…
I liked what she had to sell
landed me in jail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 8:14 AM
hmmm, shady dealings!!
Mehta Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 2:23 PM
hahahah. beautiful structured, robb
Campi Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Thanks for your comment on my haiku. I smiled on reading "The Hook." I have been there many times, but never landed in jail. Guess I was lucky. Looking back I say to myself: "You did what"
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