The Honeyed Morning

the cups of pink wine
mingling with the morning sun
the bees throng the cups
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Lovely! I got in to feeding the wasps last year, buffet outside meant they weren't trying to get inside ;)
Gupta Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
Michael Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:35 AM
Breakfast on cups...Nice one...
Gupta Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 10:44 AM
The cups need clarification ! ... the haiku-compulsion stands in the way ! ... thank you so much ...
Ashley Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:25 PM
A great haiku, dear Probir, buzzing with vibrant and colorful imagery. Looks like sweet morning to me.. Warmest wishes, my friend. ~Susan
Gupta Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 10:49 AM
I am honoured ... thank you ...
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