Gray Squirrel Poet Rhyme

The Holy Whole

The Holy Whole

Bent To Know Will
Loving Laughs Limit-Less
All Is The Rest, Left Unknown.
Sad For Salvation
Partial To Changing…
How Can't You? No. We’re Alone?
Endlessness Effortless En'ternity Expressing
Motherly Nurtured By Life's Blithe Soul
Each Witnessed Bleeding Nor In-Tended Blessing
Robs Our Connection To The Whole Holy Role.

-Gray Squirrel 
07-15-2025

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Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2025 at 12:44 PM Interesting last line! Gray Squirrel July 15, 2025 at 3:59 PM Thx, Kim. (;

Gray Squirrel July 15, 2025 at 12:25 PM I didn't mean to spell Eternity wrong, but I left it "En'ternity" due to a fondness for its sound and how it implies Eternity now somehow includes an "End".

Gray Squirrel July 15, 2025 at 12:18 PM Some Words Seem To Demand Immediate Reckless Un-Warranted Judgement. I Plead Innocence! But A True Verdict Requires (Nor Admits) Any Bargaining Pleas(e.)