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The Holy Whole

The Holy Whole Bent To Know Will Loving Laughs Limit-Less All Is The Rest, Left Unknown. Sad For Salvation Partial To Changing… How Can't You? No. We’re Alone? Endlessness Effortless En'ternity Expressing Motherly Nurtured By Life's Blithe Soul Each Witnessed Bleeding Nor In-Tended Blessing Robs Our Connection To The Whole Holy Role. -Gray Squirrel 07-15-2025

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Date: 7/15/2025 12:44:00 PM
Interesting last line!
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Gray Squirrel
Date: 7/15/2025 3:59:00 PM
Thx, Kim. (;
Date: 7/15/2025 12:25:00 PM
I didn't mean to spell Eternity wrong, but I left it "En'ternity" due to a fondness for its sound and how it implies Eternity now somehow includes an "End".
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Date: 7/15/2025 12:18:00 PM
Some Words Seem To Demand Immediate Reckless Un-Warranted Judgement. I Plead Innocence! But A True Verdict Requires (Nor Admits) Any Bargaining Pleas(e.)
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