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The Hollow Toll of Hell

The Hollow Toll of Hell

Old witch plucked out every hair
To weave her wicked snares.
But a deal demands a spirit pure,
And hers was beyond repair.
She traded a thumb, she traded an eye,
Yet still she paraded on
Seeking the key for the gate, the hidden escape,
Before the rise of dawn.
With nothing left of flesh or bone,
No gold left to toll,
She reached the brink and paid the price:
The sale of her hollow soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Reese Avatar
May 10, 2026 at 3:54 PM
A very haunting tail of someone selling their soul told in a very vivid and rhythmic way almost spell binding well done
Parveen Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 3:35 AM
Thankyou Charles, will come by later
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