The Holistic of Me

The matter between my eyes and my soul is for the materiali$tic
The depths of my soul only reachable by the idealistic 
My journey thus far can only be described as realistic
Sometimes I wish my life was more simplistic
I have an aura that makes me spiritualistic
But the L in my name argues I'm more Logicalistic
I'm certainly not evangelistic
In truth I'm just moralistic
When it comes to being verbalistic
I like to think I'm intellectualistic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 8:46 AM
A clever poem in monorhyme form which gives us another look into your 'you', Laura. Love the title, too. ~ Warm regards // paul
Hay Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Thank you Paul. I like to give the reader a bit of depth into who i am. Thanks for the positive feedback! Kind regards, Laura
Gondolf Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Nicely written, Laura, I feel like I know you now :) John
Hay Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Haha! Thanks so much, and for stopping by John. Warm regards, Laura.
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January 17, 2018 at 9:01 AM
This is great, could also be monorhyme...
Hay Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thanks for that SO! One is always learning and appreciate those that share such tips and advice. Thanks for stopping by. Laura.
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