The Heart's Flight

Through the shimmering veil of time Traversing the star dusted sky Twinkling as they quickly shoot by To charm the path of the heart's flight. Roaming suddenly free of fear Revived by a warm current stream Rescuing the soul from the sea's Ravenous hunger for sunbeams. Unveil the shimmer of twilight's Uncanny glow that keeps us tied Up to the limit of past time's Unfavorable sight, stressing flight. Embrace the gold streams of sunbeams Emanating from the heavens' new gleam Erasing the lies we've believed Entrusting the love that we feel. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 09.15.10

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William Kershaw

Date: 10/31/2010 7:09:00 PM

Miss Caroline, Truly enchanting. I was drawn to seek after reading your comments to Carolyn Devonshire. I will read more. It has made a painful Sunday evening a delight.In Admiration, Will

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2010 9:27:00 AM

Hello there Caroline !! What a wonderful and fascinating enjoyment to read this wonderful poem. (( many beautiful thoughts go thru my mind while reading this awesome and clever write. Enjoy and take care,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 12:29:00 PM

Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/16/2010 3:41:00 PM

Very enjoyed your words today...Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2010 10:55:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry today Caroline. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/16/2010 10:10:00 AM

A very deep thinking nicely expressed, Caroline. enjoyed the write,

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2010 3:50:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..I get those same feeling sometimes that I have that "Ravenous hunger for sunbeams"...Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/15/2010 8:41:00 PM

wonderful poem here, "embrace the gold streams of sunbeans" Path way to heaven my mother always told us. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 8:29:00 PM

What a magnificent of rescuing the beams of a soul's light from the "ravenous" sea, Caroline. We do have to let go of the past to free ourselves and find a way to embrace the light. There's a deep spiritual quality to this amazing poem, Caroline. Your words never cease to amaze me. Beautifully written with images that support the message so creatively. Nice to see you posting new work. Love, Carolyn

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/15/2010 7:13:00 PM

some deep though here Caroline. I like it. Charles