The Heartbeat of My Life

Mama don't take my breath away

My only chance to love and play

I know you're hurting I can tell

Mama don't give up on me as well


Mama I long to touch your face

Feel the beauty of your grace

I dream one day to see you smile

Mama don't ever say Goodbye

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Date: 8/4/2021 9:29:00 PM
Saddness of life, the unheard voice, hope some mother out there reads this and changes her mind, sweet sad words Arturo . . . : (
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Date: 4/9/2020 2:26:00 PM
beautifully and simply put.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/10/2020 7:44:00 AM
I am a simple person...Thanks Jon
Date: 12/16/2019 10:40:00 PM
Touching poem on choose life! Good job.
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Date: 11/30/2019 5:38:00 PM
Emotional in every respect. The awareness of a close to term unborn infant. You decided and gave this precious being, a voice. A beautiful voice. Sensitive, Arturo. (my impression)
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Date: 11/28/2019 3:21:00 AM
This is a fave. I love it. God bless you dear friend, Gina
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/28/2019 8:36:00 AM
Glad you liked it...All the best to YOU Gina
Date: 11/20/2019 9:33:00 PM
A decision made in haste, is a regret for a lifetime. A heartfelt plea. Human life is not to be taken for granted. A fave Arturo....Maria Hugs
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/21/2019 3:24:00 AM
Hola Maria...Thank you for stopping by my friend...All the best to YOU
Date: 11/18/2019 10:29:00 AM
Touches my heart. Life is precious and these little ones are too. A fav of mine. love phyl
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/19/2019 4:44:00 AM
Thank YOU Phyllis...All the best my friend
Date: 11/11/2019 7:56:00 AM
You my friend have gifted such a heartfelt plea, as the voice of the unborn child would say if able to speak.. A wonderful fav...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/11/2019 8:56:00 AM
This One troubles my Soul...I'm speechless to say another word...All the Best Robert...
Date: 11/11/2019 1:01:00 AM
This was a touching piece, Arturo. An important perspective to share, regardless of what choice is ultimately made... whew.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/11/2019 8:51:00 AM
True...
Date: 11/8/2019 4:42:00 PM
I can relate to this piece with a tender heart knowing that all things are possible with God even when they are not planned. There are so many couples who are unable to have children who would love to adopt an unwanted child. Your poem is beautifully written Arturo. : ) xxoo
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/9/2019 7:07:00 AM
Like I told someone...I can Only Speak for the child...I'll never know what it is to be a mother...in that respect I remain Silent as a mouse...Thanks Connie...
Date: 11/7/2019 7:22:00 PM
A timeless plea...for Mama... Sweeeeeet! :) gw
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/9/2019 7:03:00 AM
"A timeless plea" Is forever I would Say...Thanks Gershon
Date: 11/7/2019 2:03:00 PM
Hi Arturo, How beautiful, wonderful, tender write about an unborn child and the thoughts he or she is thinking. A bond between baby and mother is unbreakable, untouchable and fiercely protective, you bring this poem to life with your poetic talent! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/7/2019 6:09:00 PM
I know it's a touchy subject...but it hard to sensor the message...I had to speak for the unborn Child...
Date: 11/6/2019 8:13:00 PM
very touching and one that brings tears... sad subject matter ... hugs
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/7/2019 3:07:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by...the matter is a serious one indeed
Date: 11/6/2019 4:48:00 PM
I love this. Human live is so precious. It's so sad that some women make the decision to abort. You gave this topic a voice.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/7/2019 3:06:00 AM
Thanks Juliet...The baby as a VOICE
Date: 11/6/2019 3:47:00 AM
Divine plead that no human should ignore! Heavenly poetry mu friend! Arturo!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/6/2019 7:34:00 AM
Senor Trifiatis....My Greek friend...We must do our part...All the Best
Date: 11/6/2019 2:21:00 AM
This is such a tribute to a neonate who only wants to live and love their mama.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/6/2019 7:31:00 AM
YOU made me conscious of "neonate" today...Never used it before but makes so much sense when view from Latin...Thank You Caren...My best wishes ALWAYS
Date: 11/5/2019 11:06:00 PM
This brings me close to tears. Important for everyone to think about. So well written to show this topic!! Well done :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/6/2019 7:29:00 AM
I'm glad it touch your heart cause it did mine...Thanks Heidi
Date: 11/5/2019 10:24:00 PM
-- You're "the Heartbeat of my Life" Mama!! These words touch me deeply. Your entire poem tugs at the heartstrings. So sad thinking about someone ending an innocent life, before it has even begun. ~ Brandy
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/6/2019 7:25:00 AM
It gave the unborn a voice...The same voice that Speaks through YOU
Date: 11/5/2019 6:49:00 PM
(soft crying...) lovely. Ann
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/6/2019 7:23:00 AM
Baby's talking...The same one in YOU
Date: 11/5/2019 4:46:00 PM
Wow! Poem of the Day in my opinion. Clarity, beauty, perfection
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/5/2019 4:55:00 PM
The sweetest emotions of Panagiota...a big hug my friend...I'm taking a stand for life...I was a baby too...
Date: 11/5/2019 2:34:00 PM
Very touching, Arturo. Bob H
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/5/2019 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Robert...Very Kind of you...
Date: 11/5/2019 2:28:00 PM
Beautiful like life itself--a joy in every verse, Arturo.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/5/2019 4:49:00 PM
The unborn has a Right to Live...and in most cases a lot of Love to give...
Date: 11/5/2019 1:47:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Arturo - Welcome to life little child :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/5/2019 4:50:00 PM
Welcome...and Make this earth a beautiful Place to Live
Date: 11/5/2019 1:38:00 PM
This was beautiful Arturo, a poem filled with love and affection. Nicely done.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/5/2019 4:52:00 PM
The union of mother and child ...Thanks Chris
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