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See the source imageI learned when I was 69 years old that I have this problem with my heart plus I have a tumor in the same wall where the hole is located. I am only treated with medication but have lived to age 73.

The Heart With the Hole and Tumor

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          Heart                                                Heart
       Heart                                        
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     Heart                                         HHH
         Heart
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                Heart
                    Heart
                        Heart
                           Heart 
                             Heart
                               Heart
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                                     Heart
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                                                            H H H
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Date: 11/16/2018 12:59:00 PM
i hope your heart keeps on ticking for many years yet, my friend - enjoyed this creative write
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2018 3:57:00 PM
Jack, Thanks for dropping by. I will go when God gets ready to call me in. It could be in the next minute or it could be years from now. I appreciate every day. Sara
Date: 11/15/2018 8:09:00 PM
I saw your note now Sara. Sure a peculiar thing about you and the new thing is worrisome!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2018 6:38:00 AM
Andrea, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you dropping back by. Yes, the arrhythmia is very upsetting sometimes. I have had it bad for a number of days while Tommy was in the hospital and since he has come home. I am going to make me an appointment with my cardiologist as soon as I think I can leave Tommy that long. Sara
Date: 11/14/2018 4:41:00 PM
love the shape, Sara, they are not easy to do :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2018 6:35:00 AM
Eve, Thanks for stopping by. Those shapes are not easy. Sara
Date: 11/12/2018 5:09:00 PM
wow, to think you have lived several years with this. May you continue living on, Sara. I did my shape poem on a personal thing to do with health also. Well done.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2018 7:26:00 AM
Andrea, I had the hole in my heart since birth. I was adopted so if the doctor or midwife noticed anything when I was born the information was not passed on to my adoptive parents. I have had cardiograms, doctors listen to my heart, etc. and no one ever caught the defect. However, the tumor is a new thing. I am okay but the arrhythmia is really bad sometimes for some reason or another. Thanks for stopping by. I did not enter this one in that contest for it was closed. Sara
Date: 11/12/2018 1:53:00 PM
Wow, Sara, and an apt visual! Blessings!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2018 4:12:00 PM
Kim, Thanks for the wow.. I appreciate your kind review. Your presence is uplifting. Sara
Date: 11/12/2018 12:14:00 PM
and you inspire, dear sara... the best of health to you... beautiful!... how's cody?... sending my huggs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2018 12:35:00 PM
Nette, Thanks for your kind review. I am doing fine under the conditions. Cody as of this minute seems better than he has been in awhile. However, his moods can change in a heartbeat. It is part of his illness. Thanks for asking. Sara
Date: 11/12/2018 8:36:00 AM
Awesome, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2018 9:59:00 AM
Line, Thanks for the visit to my page. Your kind review is encouraging. Sara
Date: 11/12/2018 2:17:00 AM
- Very creative, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2018 9:52:00 AM
SS, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara
Date: 11/12/2018 12:36:00 AM
Say a big thank to God. Be blessed.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2018 9:48:00 AM
Ravi, Only through the grace of God have I lived and been able to do what I have done. I used to wonder why I would give out if I tried to do physical activity but I never mentioned it to anyone parents, teachers, husband or children but then I started having arrhythmia which sent me to the doctor. Sara
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