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The Heart Cries

Love felt fast can be deeper than slow Moving in those instances I can’t let go The conditions of time is nothing to a heart Rhythmic beating together from the start Don’t take and never give anything back My depth is so much more that’s a fact An old soul has lived many times before Traveling through a life’s open door Love has no boundaries, it cant be replaced Time knows no limits yet can’t be embraced If a heart is open to welcome love in Instances a deep love can truly begin Lost moments are ones you never regain Time doesn’t lessen the greatest pain Lips being kissed by the hurtful lies Are lasting words that make the heart cry July 25,2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/29/2020 12:38:00 AM

Touching words with your heartfelt emotions Brenda. Congratulations on your win! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/2/2020 5:28:00 PM

Thank you so much!;)

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/28/2020 10:28:00 PM

Much too close to one's heart, Brenda, sadness are the constants, my compliments for your 1st Place win, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/2/2020 5:28:00 PM

Thank you William! I do appreciate you!:)

John Watt

Date: 7/26/2020 10:06:00 PM

Written with much wisdom. "Lost moments are ones you never regain". Live in the moment because you won't get it back. Nice write.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 11:17:00 PM

John thank you so much!:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2020 8:34:00 PM

oh that last part really gets to a person! So touching.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 9:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea! Appreciate that!:)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2020 3:47:00 PM

an emotional piece brenda, i especially like 'love has no boundaries, it can't be replaced':-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 9:00:00 PM

Jan thank you that’s so nice appreciate your comment and read!:)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/26/2020 1:45:00 PM

lips being kissed by the hurtful lies...make the heart cry. so true Also loved the line Time knows no limits yet can't be embraced...a gut punch when love is with the wrong one. Nice write Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 8:59:00 PM

Yea it is...thank you so much!:)

John Gondolf

Date: 7/26/2020 9:02:00 AM

People that you don't love can never really hurt you, but when someone you love hurts you, the pain never goes away. We've all been there. Nicely penned, Bren, hope all is well. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 9:05:00 AM

Ahh John so nice to see you! Thank you so much and yes I’m doing fine! How about yourself? And yes love can destroy a heart by breaking it but also can make you feel wonderful!;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/26/2020 8:47:00 AM

"Love has no boundaries, it cant be replaced Time knows no limits yet can’t be embraced" Such wonderful lines!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 8:51:00 AM

Ah my county friend your comments are most welcomed! Thank you Caren!;)