Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

The Heart Cries

Love felt fast can be deeper than slow
Moving in those instances I can’t let go
The conditions of time is nothing to a heart
Rhythmic beating together from the start

Don’t take and never give anything back
My depth is so much more that’s a fact
An old soul has lived many times before
Traveling through a life’s open door

Love has no boundaries, it cant be replaced
Time knows no limits yet can’t be embraced
If a heart is open to welcome love in
Instances a deep love can truly begin

Lost moments are ones you never regain
Time doesn’t lessen the greatest pain
Lips being kissed by the hurtful lies 
Are lasting words that make the heart cry

July 25,2020

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Aditi Mishra July 29, 2020 at 12:38 AM Touching words with your heartfelt emotions Brenda. Congratulations on your win! :) Brenda Chiri August 2, 2020 at 5:28 PM Thank you so much!;)

William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2020 at 10:28 PM Much too close to one's heart, Brenda, sadness are the constants, my compliments for your 1st Place win, my friend -- Aloha~@William Brenda Chiri August 2, 2020 at 5:28 PM Thank you William! I do appreciate you!:)

John Watt July 26, 2020 at 10:06 PM Written with much wisdom. "Lost moments are ones you never regain". Live in the moment because you won't get it back. Nice write. Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 11:17 PM John thank you so much!:)

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2020 at 8:34 PM oh that last part really gets to a person! So touching. Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 9:01 PM Thank you so much Andrea! Appreciate that!:)

Jan Allison July 26, 2020 at 3:47 PM an emotional piece brenda, i especially like 'love has no boundaries, it can't be replaced':-) hugs Jan xx Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 9:00 PM Jan thank you that’s so nice appreciate your comment and read!:)

Jeanne Mcgee July 26, 2020 at 1:45 PM lips being kissed by the hurtful lies...make the heart cry. so true Also loved the line Time knows no limits yet can't be embraced...a gut punch when love is with the wrong one. Nice write Brenda. Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 8:59 PM Yea it is...thank you so much!:)

John Gondolf July 26, 2020 at 9:02 AM People that you don't love can never really hurt you, but when someone you love hurts you, the pain never goes away. We've all been there. Nicely penned, Bren, hope all is well. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 9:05 AM Ahh John so nice to see you! Thank you so much and yes I’m doing fine! How about yourself? And yes love can destroy a heart by breaking it but also can make you feel wonderful!;)

Caren Krutsinger July 26, 2020 at 8:47 AM "Love has no boundaries, it cant be replaced Time knows no limits yet can’t be embraced" Such wonderful lines! Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 8:51 AM Ah my county friend your comments are most welcomed! Thank you Caren!;)