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The Healing Ceiling

Oh to be laying on a bed
Of soft feathery fern
To rest my weary head
Not much left to learn

Except to look at the ceiling
There above the world
And know that what I'm feeling
Has brought my life unfurled

Freedom will come back to me
Freedom from the pain of life
Because for a moment I can see
& for a while I'll handle strife

Out here in the wild
Nothing can really matter
Soon will come my time to go
No importance if I'm fatter

Whether I'm dark or fair
Whether I'm short or tall
Black blond or red hair
doesn't count at all

What matters is the heart
Caring as a whole
Making a fresh start
To heal bleeding soul

When an end you are expecting
Every moment is a treasure
Of conflict your more accepting
Enjoying life with more pleasure

I need to get back out there
Away from the bother and clutter
Letting go of things, worry and care
Sludgy as a filthy gutter

It all holds me back
And I know the cure
But there's something I lack
My abilities are fewer

So I look out at my flowers
And try to get the feeling
Of spending peaceful hours
under starry ceiling

Surrounded by a sea of stars
Earth itself for my bed
Wondering if there's life on Mars
Releasing pointless fear and dread

Maybe I can push my body 
To get up and go
But ,oh damn and hodge podgy
It's so painful and slow. 




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Date: 1/14/2024 12:18:00 PM
What is above rising fills the soul with awe and keeps us aspiring for the pleasure of unveiling life treasure.. We can also deeply dive inside the heart and mind enjoying and worrying.. pondering and wondering.. How beautifully you have rendered your sentiments! How poetically you have inked your thoughts! I so much enjoyed reading you, Aly! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Aly Bahr
Date: 1/19/2024 5:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Besma. I am always blessed when I know my words have touched somebody.

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