The Healing

Aligned, intact wheels Smile of stark accomplishment, Satisfying smooth sail!
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September 18, 2026 at 1:26 AM
This is a poised, compact “blessing senryu” whose central image—wheels restored to alignment—makes healing feel physical, practical, and joyfully complete. The final line’s sibilance gives it exactly the “smooth sail” it describes.
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September 18, 2026 at 1:44 AM
Thank you Alison Smith for your wonderful comment on my poem!
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