The Hawk

hawk in very top of high Georgia pine.. view unobstructed hawk catches breeze soars on a cold clear winter day... seeks day's last fresh meal

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/18/2013 3:10:00 PM

very nice one Sara,,,, I'm always watching a hawk as I walk 1.3 miles to get my g- daughter from kindergarden school. Then we stop at pet store sometimes. Thank you for reading my Missing Pieces ;}

Terry Noack

Date: 1/11/2013 2:11:00 PM

Guess I should study up on poetry styles. :) Beautiful simplicity ... great work!!! And thanks for the comment ..

Skat A

Date: 1/6/2013 10:50:00 AM

wishing the meal is what the hawk will need till the cold comes~ LUV~ SKAT

Timothy Jacks

Date: 1/6/2013 8:22:00 AM

Hey you write Haiku preety nice there. I never realized it till now but I like Haiku. The Hawk! He comes around sometimes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2013 5:00:00 AM

A "free" hawk ..... an amazing sight. - Lovely, Sara. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2013 5:35:00 PM

NIce picturing of the hawk. You must see a lot of wildlife!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/5/2013 1:03:00 PM

Cute. Beautiful, Sara. I can see the hawk circling. Great images!

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/5/2013 12:30:00 PM

They are amazing creatures, Sara. I love watching them soar. Enjoyed your Haiku. I pray Doris's family is staying strong and you're doing well. Love, Annalise

Jack Horne

Date: 1/5/2013 11:31:00 AM

love this awesome haiku, my friend

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/5/2013 9:39:00 AM

This is such a fabulous write my friend! We have hawks where we live and we have to be careful with our little dog being out...we have to be out with him or the hawk could come down and take him! That's really scary! Anyway, your poem is spectacular, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/5/2013 9:28:00 AM

you posted quite a picture here.