The Hawk

hawk in very top
of high Georgia pine..
view unobstructed

hawk catches breeze soars
on a cold clear winter day...
seeks day's last fresh meal

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Debbie Duncan

January 18, 2013 at 3:10 PM

very nice one Sara,,,, I'm always watching a hawk as I walk 1.3 miles to get my g- daughter from kindergarden school. Then we stop at pet store sometimes. Thank you for reading my Missing Pieces ;}

Terry Noack

January 11, 2013 at 2:11 PM

Guess I should study up on poetry styles. :) Beautiful simplicity ... great work!!! And thanks for the comment ..

Skat A

January 6, 2013 at 10:50 AM

wishing the meal is what the hawk will need till the cold comes~ LUV~ SKAT

Timothy Jacks

January 6, 2013 at 8:22 AM

Hey you write Haiku preety nice there. I never realized it till now but I like Haiku. The Hawk! He comes around sometimes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 6, 2013 at 5:00 AM

A "free" hawk ..... an amazing sight. - Lovely, Sara. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 5, 2013 at 5:35 PM

NIce picturing of the hawk. You must see a lot of wildlife!

Toquyen Harrell

January 5, 2013 at 1:03 PM

Cute. Beautiful, Sara. I can see the hawk circling. Great images!

Audrey Haick

January 5, 2013 at 12:30 PM

They are amazing creatures, Sara. I love watching them soar. Enjoyed your Haiku. I pray Doris's family is staying strong and you're doing well. Love, Annalise

Jack Horne

January 5, 2013 at 11:31 AM

love this awesome haiku, my friend

Russell Sivey

January 5, 2013 at 9:39 AM

This is such a fabulous write my friend! We have hawks where we live and we have to be careful with our little dog being out...we have to be out with him or the hawk could come down and take him! That's really scary! Anyway, your poem is spectacular, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!

Jancarl Campi

January 5, 2013 at 9:28 AM

you posted quite a picture here.

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