Sneha Rv Poet Footle

The Haunted House

Steps in -
What din!

Rat squeaks 
Floor creaks

Let loose,
Ghost boos

Blood Pool -
Bats drool!

Strobe lights,
Snake bites

Suspense -
Live Fence!

Zombie -
Crombie*

Cat's eyes -
On mice

Closed space,
Lined face

Blue slime,
Red grime

Skulls stare -
BEWARE

Quiver,
Shiver!

Loud cry...
Mouth dry 

Our horde
Spots board: ....


Your end,
My friend


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Richard Martins October 1, 2016 at 11:57 AM Awesome, awesome and awesome again!! I just came across your poem. Fantastic. I have added to my favs :)

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 2:22 PM Sneha, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA

Maurice Yvonne April 12, 2015 at 8:13 PM Yeah this is really good congratulations on your win and adding this to my favs!

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2015 at 10:51 PM hey, I see it again, and this time to congratulate you! NICE win Sneha Rv April 12, 2015 at 1:07 AM THANK YOU, Andrea!! :D :D

Sandra Haight April 8, 2015 at 12:32 PM Wow, you really captured all the scary scenes in a haunted house in so few words with your awesome Footle, Sneha! Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra Sneha Rv April 8, 2015 at 11:13 PM Thanks a LOT, dear Sandra!! :-)

Jan Allison April 7, 2015 at 11:49 AM I read these yesterday - my comment has disappeared! many congrats these are brilliant:-) Hugs Jan xx Sneha Rv April 7, 2015 at 9:40 PM Thank you so much, dear Jan! :D

Nette Onclaud April 7, 2015 at 3:36 AM just incredible!.. woohoo, sneha!.. huggs Sneha Rv April 7, 2015 at 5:54 AM Thank you so much, dear Nette!!

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2015 at 4:43 PM Outstanding!! Sneha Rv April 6, 2015 at 9:41 PM Thank you!! c:

Judy Konos April 6, 2015 at 10:28 AM KQQL Sneha Rv April 8, 2015 at 11:14 PM Thank you SO much for my placement in your contest!! :-D

Kamran Rashid April 6, 2015 at 8:08 AM u frightned me..and made me to say wow wot a nice write...lovd reading your stuff..pls find time to read some of mine...hope you will like a few #respect--peace--hug--@burningsoulz Sneha Rv April 6, 2015 at 10:42 AM Thanks a lot!! :D