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The Haunted House

Steps in -
What din!

Rat squeaks 
Floor creaks

Let loose,
Ghost boos

Blood Pool -
Bats drool!

Strobe lights,
Snake bites

Suspense -
Live Fence!

Zombie -
Crombie*

Cat's eyes -
On mice

Closed space,
Lined face

Blue slime,
Red grime

Skulls stare -
BEWARE

Quiver,
Shiver!

Loud cry...
Mouth dry 

Our horde
Spots board: ....


Your end,
My friend


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Copyright © Sneha Rv | Year Posted 2015

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Richard Martins Date: 10/1/2016 11:57:00 AM Awesome, awesome and awesome again!! I just came across your poem. Fantastic. I have added to my favs :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/18/2015 2:22:00 PM Sneha, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 4/12/2015 8:13:00 PM Yeah this is really good congratulations on your win and adding this to my favs! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/11/2015 10:51:00 PM hey, I see it again, and this time to congratulate you! NICE win Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 4/12/2015 1:07:00 AM THANK YOU, Andrea!! :D :D

Sandra Haight Date: 4/8/2015 12:32:00 PM Wow, you really captured all the scary scenes in a haunted house in so few words with your awesome Footle, Sneha! Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 4/8/2015 11:13:00 PM Thanks a LOT, dear Sandra!! :-)

Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2015 11:49:00 AM I read these yesterday - my comment has disappeared! many congrats these are brilliant:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 4/7/2015 9:40:00 PM Thank you so much, dear Jan! :D

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/7/2015 3:36:00 AM just incredible!.. woohoo, sneha!.. huggs Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 4/7/2015 5:54:00 AM Thank you so much, dear Nette!!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/6/2015 4:43:00 PM Outstanding!! Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 4/6/2015 9:41:00 PM Thank you!! c:

Judy Konos Date: 4/6/2015 10:28:00 AM KQQL Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 4/8/2015 11:14:00 PM Thank you SO much for my placement in your contest!! :-D

Kamran Rashid Date: 4/6/2015 8:08:00 AM u frightned me..and made me to say wow wot a nice write...lovd reading your stuff..pls find time to read some of mine...hope you will like a few #respect--peace--hug--@burningsoulz Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 4/6/2015 10:42:00 AM Thanks a lot!! :D