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Some Things Are Just Better Left Alone.

The Haunted House

It sits well back away from the road hidden by bushes and trees.
Even the lane that leads from the gate seems colder than late Fall's breeze.
The grounds are vast and overgrown, the house is weathered, bare.
It used to be a grand estate, now no one seems to care.

The wind blows 'round the house's eaves giving a mournful cry.
Some say it sounds like a long lost soul who in this house did die.
There is a rumor in the town of things that happened here.
Most folks say the tales are true and shun the place in fear;

So it's a good place to settle down if you wish to be left alone.
Far enough out in the woods where we will feel at home.
We can prowl and we can hunt to our heart's content,
And we won't have to worry 'bout what they think of our intent.




Date 10/121/2021 - For Something Spooky Contest By Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Very fun Judy! Rumors don't have a "ghost of a chance" in your new dwelling! Congrats and high fives on your win!
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October 25, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Thank you so much Sam. God Bless, JB
Alex Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:16 AM
A great poem with beautiful images. Beautifully poetic. Congratulations!
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October 25, 2021 at 2:09 PM
Thank you so much Christuraj. God Bless, JB
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October 24, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Judy, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky haunted house poem, great imagery!
Ball Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 2:06 PM
Thank you so much Tania. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:12 PM
what a creepy tale, many congrats on your win Judy:-) hugs Jan xx
Ball Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Thank you so much Jan. God Bless, JB
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 11:45 AM
A smashing creepy tale. My first impression was werewolves. Congrats on your spooky win. Terry
Ball Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much Terry. You were right. Werewolves looking for a house. God Bless, JB
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October 24, 2021 at 9:47 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. What a HAUNTED HOUSE story. Have a blessed autumn day ..................
Ball Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much Paula. God Bless, JB
Goldsmith Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 11:39 AM
What a story. Yes, leave this one alone. Have a blessed autumn day writing away...................
Ball Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much Paula. God Bless, JB
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October 17, 2021 at 9:17 AM
That is an excellent chilly poem for this time of year, Judy! I like to be on my own sometimes, but I think I'll pass any invite to go live there :) ~ Regards // paul
Ball Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Thank you so much Paul. God Bless, JB
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October 15, 2021 at 2:29 PM
- A great poem for this contest, Judy ... and I agree with the headline "Some Things Are Just Better Left Alone" ... best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend ... take care - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. God Bless, JB
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October 15, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Enjoyed the spooky tale and good luck in the contest. love phyl
Ball Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Thanks bunches Phyl. God Bless, JB
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October 13, 2021 at 12:22 PM
So either a couple that haunts with bodies or not!
Ball Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 2:45 PM
I was thinking werewolves.lol Thanks bunches my friend. God Bless, JB
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October 12, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Loved this poem with a great ending.
Ball Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so much Victor. God Bless, JB
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October 12, 2021 at 1:00 PM
I so love this Scary poem. It's a haunting expression of delight - Love it. God bless you with a win, my friend. Love, Gina
Ball Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Thank you so much Gina. God Bless, JB
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October 12, 2021 at 12:29 PM
I like this scary Halloween inspired work. Maybe it can be brought to life again. I guess if a person wanted to live in a place without paying rent or buying it or paying taxes that would work out very well. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
Ball Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Thanks bunches Sara. God Bless, JB
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October 12, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Hi Judy, I know I wouldn't want to live in such a place. I agree it would be perfect for someone who didn't want to be bothered. Great job. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
Ball Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Thanks so much Alexis. God Bless, JB
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