Emil Mcclain Poet I do not know?

The Happiest Day

the happiest day is christmas day.

as people share thier gilfs and thier love.

and you see in the sky a dove.

a sign of peace.

this is one thing i want to say.

this is the day to celebrate jesus brithday.

the happiest day is christmas

so lets make this christmas the best.

out of all the rest.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 8, 2010 at 7:46 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown December 8, 2010 at 4:54 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Emil. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol

Jose Velazquez December 7, 2010 at 7:41 PM Short and simple piece. I would try rewriting this though. The rhyme scheme is off, and your verse run in together which makes it hard to read.