The Hangover

Signs of life now
Still alive,man,somehow
Post comotose stirring
Emerge from cognizant blurring

The dead are raised from these very stones
With regrets untold, unknown
Dread the punishing sun
As it cracks our weary bones


/(I know the rhyme cantor is so uneven lol)\
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 5:41 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mike. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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March 2, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Creative and pensive thoughts, Mike
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