The Gulshan Lake 2

The children of slum
Swim in the dirty water
Of the Gulshan lake!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Deeks Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 5:44 PM
So touching... Thats why i love haiku it wipes out all the pushed pen and leaves much to the imagination.... great write ..tyvm
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 1:23 PM
Poor kids. I enjoyed reading this, Asif.
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