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The Guide

(A lone voice whispers)

What a year to be alive to see poetry still thrives

Want some new readers?

Well, I asked this once when I was institutionalised

Before in The Great In-Between 
I was baptised to be non institutionalised

So here's my advice 

Try to write immersive experiences 
For some long-lost legends whisper 

That every spirit seeks to walk in newer realms on their way to redemption 

So take your readers by the hand and like a leader 

Take them on soul tempting journeys into the unknown and mysterious 

Hold them mesmerised

Spellbound through words like ringing church bells

To keep them reading slowly like the birth of a caterpillar 

And when that red key eventually turns in their minds

To open a blue portal and enter them into a strange interdimensional place

Through the two great ancient white pillars

Of
Ashtara and Shoka
 
To where smoke and fire
Day and night burns 

A spiritual place
I call The Great In-Between

A mythical experience for the curious mind
Begins

A fog filled place where pain sorrow and sin

All things seen or unseen
Like love and happiness exists 

A wild place where darkness 

Shadows selves
Corwatturea creatures

Spirits
Angels and beauty 
Coexists 

In absolute tranquility and harmony

And you my friend 

In that subliminal moment, that red key turns

A new reader of yours is reborn

One who seeks their Drover
As their need and curiosity takes over

To move them through higher high roads and lower byroads 

Unexplored old church lanes 
Of joy and pain 

To walk them through the fire and snow storms 

To find a new mother load 
Via this underground railroad

Unspoken poetic stories to take them under like chloroform

For their souls 
After stepping into

The GREAT IN-BETWEEN 

Will have been truly transformed and renamed 

For now, they'll walk like new aged gods and goddesses 

Baptised in that smoke 
Fire and rain

To stand up strong like their newfound Drover 

And walk forward forever
Trying to stay pure and unashamed 

As their need for more
Takes over

(C)
Copyright John Duffy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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