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The Grieving Process

Graves of old, like blistering souls do hesitantly stare While tears like reflective mirrors crawl down my cheek so fair Hardly are these bodies buried, but merely gently carried... to Your heart: up there I ask myself in loneliness, "Can" You relive them again? The question still addressed, "we" can forever cry, my Friend For love omits a flame of hope, "let" no one with loss have fear Only allow You to envelope "them" with streams of your heavenly tear With Your power let the dead "Rest" and let us live ones too! Remove the fear and the dread "in" the souls of the living that rue Tell me, will our hearts find "peace?" ...will the Grieving Process cease?
Written by Laura Elizabeth Breidenthal For HGarvey Daniel Esquire's MIDDLE OF THE ROAD Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/18/2013 3:20:00 PM
Dear Laura, just want to say again Thank-YOU for supporting my contest. A Well Deserved Win. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR (Loyal) Liege...HG
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:56:00 PM
thanx for these words. I like it.
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Date: 2/12/2012 3:25:00 AM
LAURA,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:27:00 PM
Dear Laura, Just want to Congratulate YOU for Your Third Place in my Contest "Middle of the Road" "The Grieving Process" is an Excellent POEM for this Contest Thank-YOU for Supporting my Contest LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:35:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you on your win in HG's "Middle Of The Road" contest Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2011 9:47:00 PM
OH I LIKE THAT! so deep and meaningful...you got some serious game. - Kyle
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