The Greektown Shooting

"You are not alone" she whispered to a dying girl 
 while the angels swooped down to hold a pearl 
 Unspeakable acts in a world of dishumanisation
 mental illness is spreading, inside our Nation..

Why is it the innocent pay for the debt 
 of sick people they have never met?. 
 I cannot imagine what Linda was thinking 
 as she held a dying soul without blinking

In memory of this beautiful soul that died 
 let us bow our heads and prep our souls 
 for a moment of quietude and silence 
 Let us say a prayer for those who died 

Mental illness is like a candle stick snuffer 
 extinguishing flames in a cone shaped world
 Its the innocent ones that go on to suffer 
 in a world where violence/ treason is hurled. 

July 24, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/24/2018 12:46:00 PM
You are so right, Pixie. The innocent are the ones who suffer. This is one screwed up world! Wonderful tribute:)
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Date: 7/24/2018 12:09:00 PM
a heartwarming tribute, Pixie. Well done.
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Date: 7/24/2018 11:39:00 AM
Such sad tragedy..it happens so frequently..and no solution in sight..apt topic Pixie.
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