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When shadows of the evening fade,
    And earth she wears her darkest dress,
     It's magic time as stars parade,

     Like jewels, into jet inlaid.
     We gaze, as land and sky caress,
      When shadows of the evening fade.

       As daylight and the nightime trade,
       The world still turns, for this we bless.
        It's magic time as stars parade.
                
        Our moon each night will serenade,
        Her timeless flight, for loves success
        When shadows of the evening fade.

        The milky way's a silver braid,
        Like diamonds sparkling in a tress.
        It's magic time as stars parade.

        The zodiac, earths rich brocade.
         This bracelet , charms us with finesse,
          When shadows of the evening fade.
          It's magic time as stars parade.


   I told Jan Allison this was the first poem i had ever written.
   I was mistaken, recently i found an old school exercise book,
   With a poem i wrote in 1951 aged 11. It was named  The Tramp.
   So i entered this on Poetry Soup also.  Regards George.

     8 / 31 / 2017.
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December 22, 2015 at 4:03 PM
george, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
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December 22, 2015 at 11:21 AM
Congrats on your win with this fine poem!
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December 22, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Lovely write n win george.. big congrats!
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December 21, 2015 at 11:54 PM
george, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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April 5, 2015 at 10:06 PM
George, Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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April 6, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Hi Linda, i wish you a most happy Easter too. Enjoy George.
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March 19, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Hi George:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Always ~LINDA~
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March 16, 2015 at 12:17 AM
GEORGE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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March 17, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Hello LINDA, thankyou so much for being very kind with your comments. George.
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March 15, 2015 at 4:17 PM
George:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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March 17, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Hi SKAT, your comments are most welcome i appreciate your visit. Thankyou. George.
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March 8, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Hi George, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
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March 9, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Hello Linda, i do appreciate your support in reading my poetry. Thankyou so much. George
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March 5, 2015 at 11:44 PM
George, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
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March 9, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Thankyou so much SKAT, this poem means more to me than being the first one i had written. It was for my first great grandchild. Aurora. So nice of you to send congratulations.
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March 4, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Lovely to read your first poem George a beautiful poem for your great grandaughter. Having read some of your other poems i feel you have been writing for a long time but maybe not posting them:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
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March 4, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Hi jan, in truth this was the first poem i have written. Aurora was born mid summers day 2013. I have no idea why i wrote the poem. It just happened as i began to make her keepsake box.Thanking you for being so supportive. George.
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February 21, 2015 at 10:04 PM
George, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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February 25, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Hi SKAT. Thankyou for your very warm welcome it's much appreciated.I am still learning the ropes, as it is a new venture for me.I expect it will take me some time get into a rhythm.George.
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February 21, 2015 at 12:25 AM
George,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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February 25, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Hi. Linda? Thankyou for your very warm welcome to poetry soup. I'm so glad to have joined.It seems like i made the right choice after a lot of deliberation.I look forward to a visit to your personal site in the near future. George.
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