The Greatest Gift

The Greatest Gift
For Amir....5/18/00

I received a gift from The Lord above. 
A gift that I would treasure, a gift that I would love
.
It was one of the greatest gifts I have ever known, 
it enlightened my heart, and chilled me to the bone.

Lord, I thank you for this child you sent, 
he keeps me on my knees and makes me repent.

Sometimes so sweet, so loving so true,
 that I know that he, was a gift from you!

But there are those times, 
when his ways I don't comprehend ...
 Serious attitude, unwilling to bend.

Talking out of turn, or a bit too much, 
seems so unfeeling, so devoid of touch.

Inspite of this, I try to understand,
 as he changes from a boy,
and prepares to become a man.

I ask that you watch over him, 
wherever he may be, 
for he was the greatest gift , you ever gave to me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 22, 2016 at 7:54 PM
This is x00l.... Bonita... Linda
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May 22, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Ah the teenage to man age, with the Lord you will surely manage!:) Nice poem btw!
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May 22, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Yes indeed. Thanks.
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