The Great Wall

Built from a brick into a cell
I'm a life-giving cell in a shell
Beneath the long shadow you cast
Deep within your soul of cement

We treasure more than the silk we sell
The world will know our power as well
High perpendicular the dreams you overcast
Can be seen a peoples greatest feat

History stands at the edge like a waterfall
Below the great monument lies our hell
Our legacy of obedience and descipline
A dynasty rising from the oriental plane

A thousand years of history you do tell
That atop the Himalayas freedom dwells
Spreading like a wind blown document
The great wall is our lasting testament
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 7, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Thabang, WOW, that was great. The Great wall of all Walls. China's got one of the best histories ever. A perfect 7. Love the poem. SKAT
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