The Great Illusion

The great illusion Is a bright and shining thing Known as happiness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 1:30 AM
Awesomeness! Really great
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Yes and of that we cling! Nice!
Kendrick Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Yes, happiness is an illusion..Joy is completely different..Thanks for reading my work..Sara
Negron Flores Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Happiness shines in you when you feel happy. Beautiful poem Juli.
A   Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Juli, i have many of these illusions... Linda
Dom Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 3:02 AM
this heavy thought trods on my brains like squashed plums...but there must be more to this illusion?
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