The Great Eternal City

High up in the heavens, sits a lovely peaceful place. Your faith and good deeds will take you there, in the afterlife. The city n the clouds, its name is Shambhala.
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 11:11 PM
This is subtle, but telling. A promise rather than a warning, gently done, my friend.
Kiser Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Thanks so much, Caren.
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:36 PM
ahh I recall three dog night with this one! Sweet poem
Kiser Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 11:46 AM
I have the old album with that song on it! Glad it brought back a good memory. Thanks.
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