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The Great Eternal City

High up in the heavens, sits a lovely peaceful place. Your faith and good deeds will take you there, in the afterlife. The city n the clouds, its name is Shambhala.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/16/2018 11:11:00 PM

This is subtle, but telling. A promise rather than a warning, gently done, my friend.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/19/2018 11:46:00 AM

Thanks so much, Caren.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2018 5:36:00 PM

ahh I recall three dog night with this one! Sweet poem

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/19/2018 11:46:00 AM

I have the old album with that song on it! Glad it brought back a good memory. Thanks.